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"Leafpool, can I speak with you?"
"Sure Cloudtail. What is it?"
"There's a thorn stuck in my paw."
"I see." Cleavepool walked away from the herbs she was sorting and over to Cloudtail. "Hold out your paw, please."
Cloudtail held out his paw. Cleavepool took a hold to the thorn in her mouth and pulled it out.
"So," Cleavepool said as she spit out the thorn. "Who's going to the gathering tonight?"
"I'm not sure. Firestar hasn't announced it yet.
"Oh."
"I hope I get to go."
'Oh Cloudtail. You will be there. Just not how you expect to be...' Cleavepool thought with a grin.
"Well, I guess I'll see you later, Leafpool." As Cloudtail turned to leave, Cleavepool took out a syringe that was hidden in her herb supply. She charged at him and as she did, Cloudtail turned his head and was shocked when the syringe was stuck in his neck and the plunger was pushed in, causing whatever medication that was in it to go into his bloodstream.
"W-what? W-what was that f-for?" Cloudtail's speech started to slur as the paralyzer started to work. He blinked, and then the world went black.
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Cloudtail tried to open his eyes, it was difficult. He couldn't move his body. In fact, it took most of his strength to open just one eye. He tried to look around. Everything was fuzzy, but he could tell that he was not in camp. In fact, it looked as if he was on the island. But why would he be there? And why couldn't he move? He tried to remember, but only got a headache. Suddenly, he heard a cat coming.  He tried opening his jaws to speak, but they wouldn't move.
Cleavepool walked into sight. She was carrying something sharp... and shiny. It looked like a twoleg thing. She set it down and walked over to Cloudtail.
"I'm sorry Cloudtail. But I  have to do this. I wish I could have killed you first, but it'll be more fun this way..."
Cloudtail's eye widened a little in terror. What was she going to do to him? Why did she have to do it in the first place?
Cleavepool picked up the shiny object and walked over to Cloudtail. "It's a cleaver, if you want to know," She spoke around the 'cleaver' she was holding in her mouth.  "If I do this right, you will stay awake while your insides are removed..."
Cloudtail was now terrified. He could do nothing. All he could do was sit and watch as the 'cleaver' tore his belly open. He couldn't even scream in terror. His paralized mouth kept his screams locked in his throat. He could feel the warm blood gushing out of his wound. He wanted to shut his eyes as Cleavepool started removing his organs, but he couldn't bring himself to do it.
"Now Cloudtail, I am done. I'm going to leave you here, now. You should die very soon. See you tonight at the gathering..."
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Firestar led his group of cats out of the camp and toward the lake. Cleavepool felt excited. She couldn't wait to see what everyone would do when they found Cloudtail near the base of the tree that the leaders used to announce things at gatherings. She didn't bother remembering what name they had given it, It wasn't important. Her pelt felt like ants were crawling through it as Firestar jumped onto the log that they used as a bridge. Everyone followed him, Cleavepool followed last. She could tell that ThunderClan was the first to arrive by the quietness. Either that, or the other clans had found Cloudtail's body already...
As she jumped down off of the bridge, she heard a scream of terror. She tried her best to hide her smile and  try to act concerned as she pushed her way through the ThunderClan cats that were frozen in fear. She stopped. Brightheart was standing a few tail lengths from Cloudtail's body. Crows were eating it.  The crows were cawing and making an awful lot of noise. Cleavepool could hear more cats walking across the bridge. She guessed that it was RiverClan. And she was right. Lepoardstar pushed her way through the crowd of shocked cats. "What in StarClan's name is going on?" She hissed. She stopped when she saw the ginger and white she-cat that was staring at her dead mate.
Then Firestar spoke. "W-what happened t-to Cloudtail?" The leader's voice was unstable, and he was shaking.  
Everyone was to shaken by what they saw to say anything. Soon WindClan and ShadowClan showed up too, all asking why everyone was so quiet until they saw the body. There was silence until Blackstar asked, "So what do we do? Do we continue the gathering?" Firestar quickly thought about it. I guess we will move Cloudtail's body out of the way for now and continue the gathering. For once, Cleavepool was shocked. She had thought that the cats would have been too shaken to even think about continuing the gathering. But she still walked up to Firestar and asked if he needed help carrying him. He nodded and asked  Brightheart to come over and help. She slowly nodded her head, still to shocked to speak. The crows were still devouring Cloudtail's body. They only moved when Cleavepool dashed at them, scaring them away for a minute before they tried coming back.  She refused to let them continue eating him.
Firestar, Brightheart and Cleavepool picked up Cloudtail's body and carried it to the log bridge. They crossed it and set Cloudtail down at the end. They quickly hurried back across and Firestar walked over to the base of the tree, stopping to walk around the blood stained spot on the ground. He started climbing the tree trunk, and the other leaders followed. Firestar went first. He explained how Brambleclaw was missing and so was Squirrelflight. He told everyone to keep an eye out for them and tell him if they saw them. The other leaders talked about how the prey was running and then the gathering broke up. Cleavepool, Firestar and Brightheart stopped to pick up Cloudtail's body and headed back to camp with the rest of the cats from ThunderClan.
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"Tonight, we sit vigil for Cloudtail. He was a good warrior and we will all miss him" Firestar announced after everyone had returned and Cloudtail's body was set in the middle of the camp. Cleavepool wasn't interested in sitting vigil. In fact, she would much rather go back to her medicine cat's den and sleep. She walked away from the body of the cat that she had murdered earlier that day, and padded straight to her nest and layed down. She fell asleep, thinking about who she would kill next...
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She awoke the next morning to commotion outside of her den. She grumbled and stood up, walking outside because she knew she wasn't going to be able to get back to sleep now. Sandstorm was in the middle of the clearing, along with Birchfall and Dustpelt. They were panicking.
"Firestar!"  Sandstorm called. She waited to see the ThunderClan leader's head poke out of his den before she continued. "It's Squirrelflight. We've found her."
Yes. Chapter 3. Took me long enough >.>

Merf.

So yeah. No preview image this time, cause like, I'm on my laptop. Soooooo yeah. FAAIIILLL

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Kittens-and-wolves Featured By Owner Edited Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My stomach is churning and I can't stop gagging; You're a good writer.
Now if you excuse me, I'm going to throw up now.
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I think you should put a mature content.;)
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Ask--ThunderClan Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
This story is very interesting! 
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Amberblaze0726 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014   Digital Artist
._.' This scares me.
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Skylark23 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Some parts of this story are extremely similar to Cupcakes, that must have been what inspired you, eh?
I bet you one of her last victims will be Crowfeather >:D Idk, I'm only on chapter 3
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RoryGoesPchooo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope, I read cupcakes months after the latest chapter I wrote for this story. This story began as a joke story that mixed warriors and higurashi together.
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Skylark23 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Oh, I see. So many parts are similar though! Hm, strange, but I love this story!
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chole785 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Cleavepool started removing his organs." 

Then I barfed....
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krusherthehedgehog22 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
omg cloudtails death really made me fucking scared
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:iconask-loner-ravenpaw:
Ask-Loner-Ravenpaw Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
This kinda scared me more than the others XD
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TheBlazingEmber Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why kill cloudtail?
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InSaNe-CoRnEr-CaT Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why cloudy?
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zeepastaX7 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
AW SNAP! RENA JUST WENT ALL SHION ON RIKA! Oh em I mean cleavepool went all shion on cloudtail.
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dark-demonfox1 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Digital Artist
POOR CLOUDTAIL!
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Bloodshadewolves Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconikilleditplz:
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straycat-luna Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Kittencannonz Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
e.e I want to stop reading but I can't
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wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
WHAT THE CRAP THIS STORY IS THE MUST WERIDEST GROSSESTS STORY EVER SO GOREY I AM CRYING!!
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transkiljoys Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you think this is bad read Cupcakes or Sweet Apple Massacre e_e (It's not Warrior Cats related, It's a MLP thing)
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wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
ive watched cupcakes it was horrible i was like o-o the whole thing and then i wanted to throw up XD
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transkiljoys Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, the fanfic is worse! DX
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wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
XD
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J-e-l-l-a Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
amazing!;o;
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XxDillPicklexX Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Professional
pfft, who needs to study when you have this awesome fan fic to read :D
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BeautifulTadgedy Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
JSDHSAJDFSH!! ANOTHER HIGURASHI REFERENCE!! Cloudtail is Rika. There's a knee-slapper. >_>
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P00pi3 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
NOOO NOT MY FAVORITE CHARCATER :c
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wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
IKR!
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The-Coffee-Mudkip Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh, it's ok, pi, you will enjoy the next few chapters....hehehe....
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Talkingtree4 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
oh and you can't take out someone's organs while they're alive
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scarlet-pikachu Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Actually you can, if you do it just right, see you start with organs that they can function without, then pull the more important ones out, if they're attached they'll still work to an extent.
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Talkingtree4 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
did you really just tell millions on of people on the internet how to torture and kill a living being?
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scarlet-pikachu Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
Basic knowledge one can get from dissecting an animal or from reading a college textbook. Millions of people already know it.
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The-Coffee-Mudkip Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Don't spam us with troll!!!
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Talkingtree4 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You really should go to therapy. These stories are gruesome, you must have a lot of anger inside. [link]
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The-Coffee-Mudkip Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You need to go to therapy for being a troll! and listen, she doesn't have any anger except when people like you troll on her hard work! now go and leave cleavepool, us and lorin alone! stop making us suffer with your trolling!
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Talkingtree4 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Guys, I'm trying to get on the next ask Cleavepool
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Merginae Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dude. This whole thing is based off a gory horror anime. What do you expect?

Also you can have your organs removed while still alive, or at least some of them. It used to be a form of torture back in the old days y'know. ;P
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beautifulBrightstar Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Onleh, I feel sorry for Brightheart, so shaken by the dog attack, and now losing her mate that was the one who comforted her through that time. *Sniffle*
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kankristopher Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Finally you killed a cat I hate XD,lol the cats i love I wnat dead for soem reason XD
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AlermixFluff Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
ffff IF I FOUND CLEAVEPOOL IN REAL LIFE I WOULD KILL HER THEN RIP HERE UP :iconfuuuplz:
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OkamiAmatrusui Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
dude epicness
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emowolve Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its awsome
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FrigidBlood Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
omg you always make me shiver with excitement hurry for chapter please!
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Sharkayartist Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg. :iconthisplz: =best.
I LOVE
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Parsli Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like your Cleavepool story,very interesting.
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0HoshiKuzu0 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Huh? Wait, I thought Leafpool was kicked outta the medi den... and where's Jayfeather and Lionblaze? Does this take place before all that happened?
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RoryGoesPchooo Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I haven't read any of the books where leafpool is not a medicine cat anymore. This takes place a little bit after Brambleclaw kills Hawkfrost.
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0HoshiKuzu0 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Okay. :3 I was just wondering.
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Fynntastic Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
I LOVE THIS!! :D
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Beech-the-Tree Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Kill firestar next!!1 -bounces up and down- I like him, and I looooooove Cloudtail, but I love this waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more.
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