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Cleavepool stared blankly into the clearing.  Sandstorm was horrified.  "W-We couldn't move her body. Not until you saw her, Firestar." Firestar froze. Cleavepool looked around. Everyone was horrified. She couldn't blame them. Finding Cloudtail at the gathering and now having Squirrelflight's body show up. Then Ashfur spoke.
"We have to go get her body, Firestar. We can't just let it sit there..."
"...You're right Ashfur. Brightheart, Sandstorm, and Leafpool. Can you come with me to go get her?"
The four cats traveled through the forest, Sandstorm leading them to the place where Squirrelflight's body was. Cleavepool could already smell the stench, and they were still aways away from it. Cleavepool's eyes started to water the closer they got to the body. In almost no time, they patrol pushed through the bushes and into the small clearing that Cleavepool had killed Squirrelflight in.
Squirrelflight was in the middle of the clearing, still caught in the fox traps.  She had started to rot, and crows had eaten part of her, and by the smell of it, a fox had too, when the body was still fresh. Firestar stared, frozen in fear. He clearly wasn't expecting this...  Crows had eaten her eyes, and had ate a lot of her rotting flesh.
Brightheart spoke up. "Firestar... I don't think we should bring her back... We should just bury her here."
Firestar blinked. "Yeah. You're right. The clan doesn't need to see her like this."
The patrol made it's way back to camp. When they got there, Firestar lept up to the highledge, and called a clan meeting.
"We buried Squirrelflight where she was... We didn't want to bring her back to camp... We were afraid that... It would disturb clan activities."
The clearing was filled with worried whispers, cats wondering why the body wasn't brought back, wondering why the body would disturb the camp... After Firestar ended the clan meeting and jumped down from the highledge, Cleavepool walked over to Brightheart. "Hey Brightheart, could you help me collect some herbs? The ones I need are near the ShadowClan border."
Brightheart looked up. Her eye that was dull grieving from the loss of Cloudtail brightened up when Cleavepool asked her to help. "Sure, Leafpool. I'm happy to help." She said with a smile.
Cleavepool faked a smile.  "Come on. Let's go."
The two she-cats walked through the forest, Cleavepool in front of Brightheart.  Cleavepool listened carefully. She couldn't hear Brightheart's pawsteps, but every time she turned her head to look behind her she could see the other she-cat walking behind her. Cleavepool quickly changed her pace, and as soon as she did, Brightheart changed her pace as well, making it so only one set of pawsteps could be heard.  'is she trying to mess with me by making our pawsteps match?' Cleavepool thought.
They reached the spot where the herbs were growing.  "We still have some in stock, but it's always nice to have fresh herbs." Cleavepool said and turned around. Brightheart was looking at her with a blank expression, and before Cleavepool could say anything, she had kicked dirt into Cleavepool's face.
"It hurts!" Cleavepool squealed and fell backwards. "What did you do to me?!"
Brightheart kept her face blank and walked over to Cleavepool who was writhing in pain on the ground, frantically trying to rub the dirt out of her eyes. She walked over to Cleavepool and stood over her. It was then that Cleavepool noticed the syringe in her mouth.
"No!" Cleavepool jumped to her paws and tryed to grab the syringe from Brightheart, but before she could reach her, Brightheart had kicked more dirt up, but this time some got in her face, too. Cleavepool took this chance and threw her to the ground. She had hiding places, scattered throughout thunderclan territory, hiding many weapons. In fact, there was one just in the bushes next to the herbs she was going to collect. Cleavepool ran to the bushes and grabbed the weapon.  Brightheart finally had rubbed the dust out of her eye and stood up, still holding the syringe in her mouth.
"If that's how you want to play, Brightheart, then fine!" She pushed a button on the weapon and it crackled and showed electricity. The two she-cats stood just a couple tail lengthes apart waiting for the other to make the first move.
"Make a move already, Brightheart! If you don't then I deffenetly will!" Cleavepool kicked up fallen leaves and ran through them, using them to hide her. By the time the leaves had fallen to the ground, Cleavepool was right infront of Brightheart, she bit down on her weapon, pushing the button again and shoved it into Brightheart's neck. She fell backwards, shocked by the sudden volt of electricity that had hit her.  Cleavepool walked over to her.
"How did you like that?" She asked and moved to where she was standing over the ginger and white she-cat. She grabbed the syringe from her, it was much easier now that the half-blind warrior wasn't holding onto it like her life depended on it. Cleavepool shoved it into Brightheart's front leg, pushing the plunger down.
"Heh. Teaches you to mess with me. This drug doesn't look like one I've used before... I wonder where you got it? Oh well. Let's see what it does to you." She took a few steps away from Brightheart and waited for her to do something.Brightheart stood up on shaking legs, and coughed.
"Oh come on! Look at you, you're pathetic! That was too easy! Now all that's left for me to do is sit here and watch you die. But I was really looking foreward to torturing you first, I really don't wanna give that up. Hey, I'll tell you what. How about we change the stage and move to a place where I can torture you?" Cleavepool laughed.
Brightheart shakily walked over to a stick that was lying on the ground. It was sharp and pointy on one end. She picked it up and turned to face Cleavepool.
"Well, it looks like you still have some strength left in you. I guess torturing you wouldn't be any fun if you didnt't. I'm sure I will have more fun driving nails through your paw if you're struggling while I do it."
"I'm sorry," Brightheart's tone of voice was different, somehow changed. "But I'm going to have to say no. Find someone else to torture."
"Now that's the kind of aditude I like. But Brightheart, tell me just how threatening do you think you are when you can barely stand?" Cleavepool's voice grew colder. "If you think you're getting out of this, then you're wrong."
"Well maybe we have different deffinitions for that. I could stay here and let you torture me to death, or I could just leave here now, and be through with this." Brightheart was shaking, Cleavepool didn't know if it was from fear, or from the drug that was running through her bloodstream.
"Leave here? Haha! I dare you to try it!"
Brightheart raised her head, the sharp stick she was holding in her mouth looked like it was waiting to stab someone. Cleavepool giggled and pressed the button on the weapon again. Instead of charging at Cleavepool, Brightheart threw the stick aside and walked a few pawsteps toward the nearest tree, witch had very low branches. One was broken off and sharp, Cleavepool guessed that was were the stick had come from.  
Without warning, the white and ginger she-cat slammed her head against the stick. Blood splattered on the trunk and on the ground. Brightheart moved her head away and did it again. And again. And again. Cleavepool's eyes widened. And after the seventh time Brightheart slammed her head  against the sharp branch, she fell to the ground. Cleavepool started laughing.  Blood was everywhere. Some was even on her face. It took her a little bit before her laughing turned into giggles, and then stopped. She had to hide the body... And what was a better place than across the ShadowClan border?
Cleavepool smiled. She grabbed the other she-cat's scruff and dragged her to the border, and didn't cross until she had made sure there wasn't any fresh ShadowClan scent. The only sent was slightly stale, no ShadowClan cats had been near there recently. Cleavepool dragged Brightheart's body over the border and hid it in a bush. She couldn't wait to see what would happen when ShadowClan found it...
Cleavepool finished cleaning the last of the blood off of her pelt. She decided that it was best to catch a mouse, so she would at least have an excuse to have been out of camp, because she hadn't collected any herbs, and now they had some blood splattered on them anyways. She heard a rustle in one of the bushes that was in front of her. She checked the wind direction to make sure that she was downwind from the mouse. She got into a hunting crouch and pounced, holding onto the mouse with her front paws and then gave it a quick bite to the back of the neck, killing it. She lifted her head, and smirked. She had an idea.
The brown medicine cat took her mouse back to where she killed Brightheart, looking for the syringe... When she found it, she carfully de-attached the needle from the rest of the syringe. Carefully, she pushed the needle into the mouse and picked it back up, careful not to bite into it to hard.
Cleavepool walked back into camp, almost running into Sandstorm. She blinked, and then smirked, but quickly hid it. "Sandstorm, I caught this mouse for Firestar, could you give it to him please? If I didn't have herbs that I needed to sort I would take it to him myself."
"Sure thing, Leafpool. Happy to help." She took the mouse from Cleavepool, and walked over to the rock pile that Firestar used to get up to the highlede. Cleavepool smirked and walked inside her den.
Firestar looked up when Sandstorm walked into his den. She was carrying a mouse.
"Here, Firestar. This might help you relax." Sandstorm set the mouse down in front of Firestar. She turned and walked out of the den.
Firestar sniffed the mouse, and took a bite. Suddenly he felt a sharp pain, and he spit the mouse out. His eyes widened in horror when he saw something shiney in the mouse... It looked like a dangerous twoleg thing. But why was it in his mouse? He froze. Sandstorm had given it to him. Was she trying to kill him? Was she the one who was responsible for Squirrelflight and Cloudtail's deaths?
If that was the problem, she had to leave. He didn't care that she was his mate, she had tried to kill him! He could taste blood and he felt some trickle down his chin.
Sandstorm had to go.
Cleavepool walked out of her den when she heard Firestar call the second meeting of the day. She frowned. The needle in the mouse must not have worked.
"Cats of ThunderClan. I just took a bite of a mouse that was given to me. There was a sharp twoleg thing inside of it. If I had swallowed it, it could have lodged in my throat, and I could have lost a life, maybe more," The cats in the clearing were shocked. "Sandstorm gave me the mouse. I'm afraid that she's trying to kill me... and may have killed Squirrelflight, and Cloudtail. Possibly Brambleclaw, who we can't find."
Sandstorm interupted him "But I didn't catch the mouse! It was given to me by-"
"Scilence! I don't care if you're my mate, you tried to kill me. Don't make excuses! I'm afraid that I'm going to have to banish you. From this moment on, you are no longer a ThunderClan cat. If you are seen in ThunderClan territory after tonight, you are tresspasing and will be chased off."
Sandstorm's eyes widened as Ashfur and Spiderleg escorted her out of camp.
Dude guys. Do. Not. Let. Me. Write. Chapters. Of. This. Story. While. Pulling. An. All. Nighter.
I'm serious. Even though I like, was watching Higurashi the whole time I was writing this, it just turned out... Meh.

For some reason, I have no more spell check. wtf. o3e

And i fucking hate the picture I drew for this chapter. The blood looks super fake. DAMNIT LAPTOP. Y U HATE ME?! :iconyunoguyplz:
but yeah. I... think school starts on the 30th... It's gonna be hard for me, cause this will be the first time going back to school in 2 years. And not to mention I'm starting high school. Ugh.
If I upload the picture that goes with this, It'll be in a few hours.

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SweNowa Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Artist
Hahah Higurashi reference xD
Stoneshade42 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
i just realized it was like Higurashi
Ask--Aquaheart-X Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
sguirrelflightrocks Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dun dun DUN!   Poor Sandstorm.
CrystalBlossom216 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm just now realizing, the whole Cleavepool's Revenge is based on Higurashi... The Squirrelflight part getting her paws stabbed with nails... This scene... All on Higurashi XD
TwinkleTehFoX Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was thinking the same thing XD
BEN-Drowneds-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this series is epic. I love the Bright/Cleave fight. I found out about this two days ago, and I've already started drawing fan art of her O3O Its almost like you combined creepypasta and Warriors. Yes, I know you didn't, I just haven't seen the series it was based off of. And THANK STARCLAN she killed that horrible squirrelcat THING. Keep up the good work! (JP)
chole785 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:O A murder and a half-ish! (Brightheart and the banishment of Sandstorm). Did Brightheart really just kill herself?  And I was so worried this was Cleave's end. 
Dreamy-Spirit Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I liked Sandstorm! (but this is a good story/book)
xXAskCourtneyXx Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Artist
NekoRinArtist19001 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is too aweshum.... fbehfbgyurehsgfyhbbbffbf I saw this before I watched Higurashi, so when I actually watched Higurashi, i got this strange deja-vu during the Shion and Rika scene. Now I remember why I thought I've seen dat scene before! 83
Silvaze1234rainboom Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
poor sandstorm~
jessid13 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
I love this fanfic, lol. And I usually don't like murder stories... Wow, it's strange how Warriors can make you want to read a murderous fanfic! o.o
KeshaTheWolf69 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hohohooh :D
dr4gonic Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WarriorCatsFanWCF Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The first second I read 'is she trying to mess with me by making our pawsteps match?' I screamed out 'SHION' XD I love Shion from Higurashi <3 Ahahaha <3 Very well written >w< :iconhigurashiplz:
Mikaylathewolflover Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
D8 These are long and gorey...
InSaNe-CoRnEr-CaT Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I kill you first cloudy then brighty
xXSilverskyx Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lol wow, a fanfic which a killer character with a knife kills kats.
wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
wolfgirl377 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
no no no no no no no NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SpeedTheYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Stolen from Higurashi Rika's death, search it on youtube.
RoryGoesPchooo Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Claps good job for figuring out the joke of the whole thing. No seriously I'm not even kidding. The whole thing is a parody of Higurashi.
SpeedTheYoshi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
lolololololl I reply again a million years later xD
J-e-l-l-a Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Zapxthehunter Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Artist
i see a refrence from hargishi

codelyoko12lover Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
oh gosh! i love this! XD
Shinystar64 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can see where this nightmare is going. 80
okami129 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ashfur is supposed to already be dead, isn't he? Hollyleaf killed him. Also, where is Hollyleaf if Ashfur's still alive? Also I noticed the higurashi thing, nice job with the Lostface being Rika-chan. ~<3 (Though Hollyleaf would have been better for the position of Rika since she's a big Starclan believer/follower and takes stuff like that event serious as Rika)
Chloethekitty Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
in these chapters Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather were never born.
MauraTheMutt Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this happened just after sunset. havn't read it so I dunno when Ashfur died.
Spruceheartwarriors Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BeautifulTadgedy Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
The Higurashi never ends.
RoryGoesPchooo Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You see, this whole thing is supposed to be a Parody of Warriors if it was mixed with Higurashi, so of course it's gonna be like that. Lmao.
Reneharper Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Higurashi + Warriors = Crazy Awsomeness !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FuHia8000 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student
higurashi + warriors = cleavepool epicness :D
tigerfan412 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
*is mortified by Squirrelflight having no eyes* :iconcryforeverplz:
klavierGavinlover Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
I can tell you where watch higuraashi by the way Brightheart died o.o
RoryGoesPchooo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well of course. The whole thing is a mix between Warriors and Higurashi that really shouldn't be taken seriously.
klavierGavinlover Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
yep, kinda funny.
FHFan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: *at third paragraph* Omg no why! Not Brightheart DD: :C
:D go Brightheart! But wait...I don't want Cleavepool to go either :c
no no no! >U but the weapon down Cleavepool!
Brightheart nooo!!! Not the throat!!
:c and now the syringe?
*reading her walking over to the tree* Oh
*reads a bit more* FFFUUUU you were watching Rika's death weren't you!?
*a bit more*
Really? In the mouse...
...oh least she wont be murdered now.

And that is my reaction to all of your chapters ;)
AlermixFluff Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU THATS IT. *Takes out a shotgun* DIE CLEAVEBITCHYHOE! *Shoots that bitches head. Chunks of brain n' stuff flies* YAY SHE DEAD :iconyaayplz::iconevilfaceplz:
L1lly-flow3rX Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PastelShark Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
YAAAAAAAAAYYY sjdfnjsbdkzsjhdfvbsudkyfv

I completed a chapter of my first Warrior fanfiction

I <3 Cleavepool
Midnightkiller1000 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
next plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XxHoneywingxX Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wait, who's going to be with Ashfur? :O
Willow0000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Student General Artist
poor Sandstorm
luv it :D
hawkstarartist Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Can Cleavepool keel off Firestar, Sandstorm and Ashbetch please???
Midnightkiller1000 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Fynntastic Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
I love this so much this series RULES .3.
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